NEWS.

“CHILLED MORTALITY”, is now complete.

HOWEVER… read a page of the story and I asked myself… Am I overwriting?

Sounds abit strange to think that there is such a thing, but apparently it’s a well known trait. The point about overwriting, is that it gets in the way. It hides the beauty underneath, covered with frills and trills, that I think are creative…

“Paul rose from his seat, inconveniencing the interview. He could see how Jan was struggling, not only from sitting too long, which would give her aches and pains that may well last for days, but also with him. It was problematical and she didn’t do well with problems, so said her Teacher when she was at school. She struggled reading his face as easily as she once had, seemingly searching it for reassurance, a little help, his eyes being the only give away. “

Re-edited:

“Paul rose from his seat, inconveniencing the interview. He could see how Jan was struggling, not only from sitting too long, but also with him. It was problematical, reading his face as easily as she once had, seemingly searching it for reassurance, his eyes being the only give away.”

AND SO, ON WITH THE EDITING!

Synopsis:  The  year is 2068. Sat within a journalist’s bizarre interview, Paul and Jan tell of a story fifty years past. They talk of an almost insurmountable marital problem and how circumstance finally determined their future. All in the twisted face and obscure setting of GM Cryogenics, the bodily abuse, the deceitful management and the catastrophic measures taken to further corporate agendas.  They talk of the blackmail, the dark and nefarious plots hatched to do them harm, whilst within the white cylinders, the dead wait on their envisaged renaissance.

However, beneath Paul and Jan’s story, there lies one amazing fact!

 

 

POETRY Saturdays on my website and on social media, will include some Poetry.

I am a member, ever since September, of a kind of social club, no writer should ever snub…  I enjoy it and am quite pleased with my contributions. All of which and some of those belonging to my fellow club members, can be found under the Short Stories and Poetry tab in the navigation bar. Take a look.

And… if you too want to join in, drop me a line via the contacts page.

 

My latest book.

The last in the Teacher series; GONE TOMORROW is my latest release. This is a stand alone book and can be read in its entirety without reading the previous books.

Detective Sergeant Sally Reid has turned against Chillborough police to  side with a clever hippyfied man known as Teacher. He is renowned for extorting people and authorities, aided by his inordinate talent for hypnosis.  Sally however, double crosses him, takes £100,000 from him and ‘Serapis’, the ancient deity to which he belongs, and escapes to France.

Will she get away, with or without the money?

Will the British and French police catch her?

 What will Teacher and more frightenly, Serapis do to get their money? The story tells of the exploits of all factions in a light-hearted catalogue of events and chases that will have you gasping in surprise and smiling at Teachers bizarre, diverting and entertaining mannerisms.

To buy the book go to the books tab.